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competition #3

Post by Cruella de Vil on Sat 9 Apr - 0:58:39

For Satan's Embrace

Hero

Lucius Mak played by Alden Ehrenreich

Lucius is a boyish man who lives in the kingdom of Storms End. He has brown hair and blue eyes. He isn't overly muscular, but is toned. Lucius thinks of himself as a practical man, and organized thinker and a manic idealist. Lucius is also an ex warrior who is now working security patrol for the king after falling into a drainage ditch and shattering his knee. Lucius is in love with the king's daughter, but the king is not happy and wants to break them up.

Villain

Brennschluss Narrisch played by Isabelle Fuhrman

Brennschuss is a dark haired beauty with jet black hair, fair skin and green eyes. She formerly worked on an assembly line that makes undergarments for chastity. After finding out that the garments aren't used for groin pulls she leaves the job and starts a group called "bits and pieces" which advocates for the elimination of these undergarments. The kings aides find out about her and her group and attack her and change her eyes. She then becomes a cruel, hard woman who hangs around in dance halls giving up hope of ever having a legitimate career...until she is summoned by the king.


Once upon a time there was a warrior named Lucius Mak, He was a fine looking man who one day fell into a drainage ditch and shattered his knee, which ended his career in the king's army. He became security patrol for the king and once day he sees a beautiful girl in the kings garden. When he finds the girl he discovers her identity is Princess Jade, but still falls madly in love with her.

Both knew that they could not be found so they hide in the darkest part of the forest. They knew that if they were found the king would have Lucius's head. The time they spent together way joyous. They would talk and laugh and dream of a future together that they knew they could never have. She was a princess and he was a commoner, but they still would pretend that they could possibly still be together. Lucius would say, "we can fly to the moon and we will be better than the best day in June". Unfortunately deep down they knew that it could never be, but it was fun to pretend anyhow.

One day the king was on the balcony and saw them together in the garden. He was furious. He was about to send the guards into the garden to capture and take him to the king, but the king's wise old mother said that if he does that, he will lose the princess. Even though he put a hold on rounding up the security patrol guard, he was still going to split them up somehow. The king did not want them to get lost in each others eyes, so he watched them very carefully from his balcony, just hoping that he could find a way to get the princess away from the commoner.

One afternoon the king went into town and a light rain began to fall. The king sought refuge in a dance hall called The Darkness. There he spied upon an incredible looking woman who was dancing with an older man. After watching them dance for awhile he had an idea. He called the girl over and told her about his daughter and the commoner. He said to Brennschluss that he would handsomely reward her if she broke up the princess and the man. She thought about never having to work again and also of devoting her life to eliminating the chastity undergarments. She hated the life she had and needed to do this. The king's aide made up an agreement and Brennschluss signed it. The king told her to set up a meeting with Lucius and seduce him just so the princess could see. The king told her to be quick about it, because time is of the essence. Brennschluss worried that she could not get Lucius to do what the king asked, so she thought about how she could do it. Finally she thought about a sorceress she knew and went to ask her if she knew what she could do to quickly seduce Lucius.

Brennschluss and the Sorceress met at the 13 moon club. She told the sorceress what she needed to do and the sorceress said that she will send Brennschluss a potion. All Brennschluss has to do is put a drop of the potion behind her ear and Lucius will fall madly for her.

Once Brennschluss got the potion she send Lucius a fake message from the princess that says to meet an hour earlier in the garden. Lucius is a little confused because Princess Jade usually puts a heart next to her name, but his time there is no heart. Feeling something is wrong Lucius makes things up in his head. Maybe the king found out about them and he is going to break them up of chop off Lucius' head. Maybe she is turned off by his disability and wants to break up or maybe she just doesn't love him anymore.

Lucius Mak is overwhelmed with anxiety. He couldn't think straight. He begins to sweat. His heart is beating so fast. His head is spinning so much that he loses his balance and falls off the wall hundreds of feet until he hits the ground below. Poor Lucius died from the fall and is taken away to be buried.

On the way to the castle Brennschluss thought about her life. She thought about all those years on the assembly line working for those terrible people who had her making those awful undergarments. She thought that the undergarments were for groin pulls, but she still felt guilty about making them anyway. She thought about how the powerful elite in the government took her away from her work at "Bits and Pieces"(the group which fought to eliminate the undergarments)and violated her in the worst way by taking away her free speech. She wanted to erase the memory of all the men she met in the dance hall. Their sweaty bodies pressed up against hers, the smell of booze on their breath and the horrible meetings after the dance was over. Once she does this she will never have to go there anymore. She will be free to do what she wants. All she has to do is have Princess Jade see Lucius making advances on Brennschluss and her work will be done.

Brennschluss finally gets to the garden and waits for Lucius to arrive. She waits and waits and waits, but he never comes. From his balcony the king wait, not knowing of Lucius death. Princess Jade leaves her room and walks to the garden for the regular meeting with Lucius. When Brennschluss hears rustling in the bushes she thinks it is Lucius and dabs the potion behind her ear.

The moment Princess Jade lay eyes on Brennschluss, she falls in love. He sees his daughter approach Brennschluss. He becomes irate when he sees his daughter lift her skirt and breaking off a small branch from a bush use the branch to pick the lock of her chastity undergarment. When the Princess pounces on Brennschluss the king has a stroke and dies. The two women have relations in the beautiful garden. Nature has taken its course and all seems right with the world. After a few hours both of them watch the sunset together. Brennschluss couldn't be more satisfied with the way things turned out. They both lived happily ever after.

The End

George Clooney played the King
Taylor Swift played Jade
Roseanne Barr played the Sorceress


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Post by Emma Swan on Sat 9 Apr - 1:08:40

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Post by Cruella de Vil on Sat 9 Apr - 8:03:25

I had to finish the story last night. I had no time today. Sorry for the poor grammar in parts and if things don't make sense. I was actually falling asleep typing it. lol Have a good day.
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Post by Emma Swan on Sun 10 Apr - 15:29:55




You have won the second Wizard Power of the season. You have until 6:00 p.m. EST tonight to post your pick for the Head of Household. It can be yourself or anyone in this cast. You must PM me your choice on this forum. Who you tell about this is up to you.
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Post by Emma Swan on Tue 12 Apr - 20:32:02

I forgot to post this here


IT'S ME
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From Cruella de Vil To Emma Swan, Sun 10 Apr - 16:47:11

I choose to be HOH. I will be out until about 8pm EST. Talk to you later.
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